Alphabet Soup/ Typeface

In the crit last Friday I left with a few idea changes to my design, I decided to thicken the lines and involve those in the perspective change of each letter, going from thin to thick and I think this adds a lot to the designs aesthetics but also to its legibility , I also decided to curve the edges of some letters where needed which I think also improves the aesthetics and makes each letter more light hearted and visually appealing.

I have decided not to do my design on adobe illustrator and scan it and i quite like the hand drawn (geometric style) feel to the typeface.